Here is hour 11 - hour 12 is almost edited -
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Looks like fun and you got a little taste of weather without being unsafe. I think the only nitpick I have is that at 10 hours I'd probably not be looking in my lap as the CFI when taxiing, and therefore I wouldn't be distracted from asking you if you had the controls held in the proper position for the winds during taxi.
You had enough wind blowing that those ailerons and elevator should have been locked over in the correct direction and you want that behavior on the ground to become automatic. Look at the windsock or use the ATIS information or AWOS and put them where they need to be and reassess at every turn on the ground.
Looks like you're struggling a bit with airspeed being too fast on final but at 10 hours that's not abnormal. And it's better than too slow.
I think your instructor will focus on that and smoothing up your pattern work and making it all consistent and second nature and then you'll solo. Don't worry about it too much -- he'll make sure you're safe for that before it happens and there's no rush. Lots to learn after solo, so don't make it a huge thing in your head. It's still a day you'll never forget, but don't stress over it. It'll happen when it happens.
Liked that your instructor let you make the mistake with the radios and everyone does it. Even folks with hundreds of hours flying. You recovered just fine and fixed it with him saying very little about it and encouraging you to do it yourself.
Expect as you get more consistent for him to get quieter. He will have to say less and less as you remember what he said before and apply it yourself all the way around the pattern. Just think through every step before it happens and keep thinking ahead and you'll be golden.
All those little items he's rattling off, you'll hear him saying those in your head when he's not there. Centerline, nose on the horizon, pick a spot to stay lined up, turn after you reach X feet, watch for the runway out the side window for alignment, pick another spot to aim at, nose stays on the horizon, speed check, another turn, make sure the wind isn't blowing you into or away from the runway, crab as needed to stay parallel, power back a bit as speed builds as you level off at pattern altitude, etc etc etc.
I know also that you're still in a bit of an overloaded phase, but I'd be working the use of a checklist or at least an out loud memorized items list into the routine. I didn't see a checklist anywhere in the video but I know it's edited and there's cuts to the timeline. Appropriate checklist use is a required ACS item and if you're going to progress through and past the Private rating it'll be required on every checkride from now until you're dead. ;-) Might as well build that checklist muscle now.
All of the above is nitpicks so you have some new challenges and goals. I see nothing bad in the video. Just more things to learn. And that's exactly where you're at. Keep going. Looks like a blast both for you and the instructor. He won't show it, he'll just sit over there and teach, but he's likely having a good time doing it. I saw him sneak a few grins over there. He obviously likes to encourage too.
Instructors are weird. We like it when you make a little mistake and move to correct it. That shows your judgement and skill is growing and we like that part.
That wing camera angle is weird by the way. It makes it hard to see your pitch corrections and relative position of the nose to the runway. You might be better served bringing that camera inside and pointing it at the runway from aircraft center or close. I felt like you were crabbing sideways to the runway when you weren't with the wide angle lens. I couldn't get any feel at all for your coordination of aileron and rudder from that angle.