Larry in TN
En-Route
You can make it even shorter, if you like...You should say, XXXXX tower, Cessna 12345 holding short runway 30R, ready for departure.
"XXX Tower, [callsign], Runway 30R, East departure", or
"XXX Tower, [callsign], Ready, Runway 30R"
In a turbine, which is assumed ready when reaching the departure runway, if the controller seems to have forgotten us I'll say simply, "XXX Tower, [callsign], Runway 30R" which, interestingly, is what I say when handed off from Approach to Tower for landing (unless it is at such a small and remote tower that he wouldn't have a DBRITE to see where I am).
In some parts of the world they want to hear "FULLY ready". Never did figure that part out. Asia/Middle East, mostly.