Considering he was drawing something on a map instead of visualizing it on a DG/HSI, no wonder he got confused. Actually, he drew it correctly, if we don't mind standing on our heads to read it, but he labeled it wrong (should be 54°/234°). According to the AIM, holding pattern design allows a 5 degree tolerance. You can't get that accuracy freehand drawing on paper, IMO. Besides, by the time you arrive at the fix your drawing is old news. The correct entry is determined by the latest heading as you cross the fix, so you need eyes on the DG/HSI and a simple visualization to achieve the recommended entry at the last instant. A visualization you love to disparage, btw, for no good reason other than you once couldn't do it.